经修改后基本满意 谢谢你们

good

态度很好，写的质量也不错

NIce JOB

所有订单里唯一一个不是很满意的文章，望改进，谢谢

1. Thank you so much
2. Excellent!
3. No idea yet

Thank you

Thank you!!

good

VERY GOOD. I HOPE I CAN GET A GOOD GRADES

VERY PASSION AND GOOD

挺快就完成了的

I got a poor mark in this work.

很不错

Great

nice

nicely done

速度很快～很满意

帮忙修改的文章修改的很好，就是提交的时间好晚，超过due时间的一两小时

I love it, thanks!!

非常好

great job, thank you soooo much!

服务很好 建议暂时没有

I REALLY APPRECIATE THAT. NICELY DONE.

Even though the writer have to fix the essay because of structure errors，I feel that the essay prove better than the first time. Good job ！

It only get 70% . Disappointing service.

The essay get almost 80%, is ok though.

This first essay scores 95/100 95% which in good. Thank you for the performance.

An excellent paper.

fantastic work

i dont like the para 2. the instructor says it is not that important, but the writer is emphasizing it

速度快水准高谢谢!

很好

分数虽然不是很高 但是还说的过去 给4星评价

150分得了135.

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This is my feedback from my professor, I need got each assignment grade A.

Second Assignment
81 / 100
81 %
Individual Feedback:
1) Organizational structure – 25 points. Is the paper logically organized? Are ideas cogently presented and explained? Is the writing convincing? Does the writing sustain interest?

25

2) Writing style – 25 points. Is the writing original and provocative? Does the paper have a professional tone? Does the paper satisfy the requirements in the syllabus?

Use Arial font.

21

3) Analysis – 25 points. Does the paper take and support a position? Is the analysis reasonable?

This is closer to a letter to the editor than a stand alone article. You focus too much on Zumbrum's piece.

15

4) Grammar, punctuation, spelling and syntax – 25 points. Is the writing grammatically correct? Are words spelled correctly? Is word choice correct for the context of the sentence?

Use paragraphs to help organize your thoughts. Be careful of word choice. For example, you want "rationale", not "rationally" in "It seems that a broader look at the state in which the economy finds itself has to be taken before, one gives the answer about the rationally behind this apparent inefficiency. "

20

200刀买了个76%的essay。失望

very helpful

pretty good

The efficiency is incredibly satisfied, thanks!

perfect!!!!

achieve all my requires and got a high mark.

nice job, I am satisfied with this essay, cuz i get nice mark of this essay. TA said " your essay has a polished blend of personal insight and critical analysis in addition to the incorporation of academic theories. Try to aviod summarizing information"....... honestly, thanks for the nice work.

good

Overall I'm quite satisfied.

EXCELLENT WORK

thank you for the help

非常好的写作，服务不错！

the argument in the article is not strong enough.

效率质量都不错！