This is my feedback from my professor, I need got each assignment grade A.
Second Assignment
81 / 100
81 %
Individual Feedback:
1) Organizational structure – 25 points. Is the paper logically organized? Are ideas cogently presented and explained? Is the writing convincing? Does the writing sustain interest?
25
2) Writing style – 25 points. Is the writing original and provocative? Does the paper have a professional tone? Does the paper satisfy the requirements in the syllabus?
Use Arial font.
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3) Analysis – 25 points. Does the paper take and support a position? Is the analysis reasonable?
This is closer to a letter to the editor than a stand alone article. You focus too much on Zumbrum's piece.
15
4) Grammar, punctuation, spelling and syntax – 25 points. Is the writing grammatically correct? Are words spelled correctly? Is word choice correct for the context of the sentence?
Use paragraphs to help organize your thoughts. Be careful of word choice. For example, you want "rationale", not "rationally" in "It seems that a broader look at the state in which the economy finds itself has to be taken before, one gives the answer about the rationally behind this apparent inefficiency. "
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